Comments : Unwanted talents (pride)

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    In this day and age the only thing you have to prove anything to is yourself, nobody else matters. Try capalizing your I's whenever you say I or I'm it will give your poem much better appearance. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I thought that was a very good poem.
    the way you explained that you had
    different talents from every one else.
    it was great,

    what you says a lie,
    i think should be
    what you say is a lie,

    i dunno, but it sounds better in my head that way.

    other than that nicely written

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Well I love the flow of this, the rhyming is amazing.
    Although you spelled a word wrong.

    Preform. its actuall Perform.

    But other than that. fantastic.

    Ive never been compared to another poet, so thank you for the comparison. And thank you for the comments!