Ii love it !
well doneee.

i wonder how many ppl actually do feel like that..

ur poem kept makn me want to read on some more
=D
welldone
5/5

JEss.

This was beautiful!
The emotion was so strong and your flow was almost perfect the whole entire time.
You kept my attention and made me keep reading!
great job!
5/5
((Amber))

This has good flow and the title drew me in, but the line - While you live in marriage bliss -...I think that's supposed to say marital bliss. I think it flows better. None-the-less, good job.
~Midnight Sun

Comment #1

Sad but I loved it.
It flowed well and emotion was shown.

Keep it up 5/5