5/5. this poem is excellent. there are no flaws and i find this poem beautiful and one that i can relate to. your a talented writer. keep it up.

My life was colourless,
saw a colourless future,
but when you cam in,
you coloured it and filled my heart.

^^This is a really sweet stanza, I liked it hey!
Love seems to have the enermous power to brighten not only someones life, but their whole word. Great poem

Take Care

*Sorry I meant world, lol my bad
5/5