Comments : A new beginning??

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Nice job on this write. Your emotions are coming right from your heart.

    I will be strong
    I will have faith
    Though the journey proves long
    My fortune is already made

    I love this stanza. It portrays so much hope.
    Take care Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Shellaine shelli

    Wow I loved this poem.
    It was so motivational and helped me
    to see that
    there really is hope in terms of getting
    better.
    Your first poem, torn
    is pretty much where I am at the moment
    and explains exactly how I feel
    and this one is where I want to be.
    But this was truly amazing.
    thanks for putting up such a positive poem.
    it was beautiful

    love
    shellaine