Comments : The Ultimate

  • 13 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Aww. this was really sweet, it is a true friendship poem , and it was written very well also, the flow and rythm were very good and very cute. 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Spirit

    great job
    work on your beat and if you choose to do a rhyming poem try to put rhyming words in there
    i'd give a 4/5
    but thats not good enough

  • 13 years ago

    by ABake

    This was very cute.
    I loved the emotions you portray!
    And your flow was beautiful!
    great Job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    This is a wonderul friendship poem. It's very touching. Nice even flow throughout this piece. There was a lot of depth to this as well. Nice read. 5/5


  • 13 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem
    i liked this one alot more the the one i just read
    tis real good
    thx again for the comments