Aww. this was really sweet, it is a true friendship poem , and it was written very well also, the flow and rythm were very good and very cute. 5/5
gabriella

5/5
great job
work on your beat and if you choose to do a rhyming poem try to put rhyming words in there
i'd give a 4/5
but thats not good enough

This was very cute.
I loved the emotions you portray!
And your flow was beautiful!
great Job!
5/5
((Amber))

This is a wonderul friendship poem. It's very touching. Nice even flow throughout this piece. There was a lot of depth to this as well. Nice read. 5/5

marcella

Great poem
i liked this one alot more the the one i just read
tis real good
thx again for the comments

keenan