"I give you my word, I will always be there
I love you without wax, please take care".

Thx for sharing these words, straight from your heart & soul.. xx

Iola

A wonderful poem of true love! Full of feelings and emotions. I love it !:)

Great poem....has a natural flow that buts my mind in a relaxed and loving state....enjoyable read...great job 5/5

Thank you for your kind comments and votes..

Great poem, you are wonderful expressing your feelings. I really loved the poem
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Lisa Ann

Great poem, you are wonderful expressing your feelings. I really loved the poem
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Lisa Ann

This was beautifully written.
Flow was good for the most part, but I thought there were times when it seemed a little shaky...try eliminating some of the fillers (I, you, and etc) to make it perfect, it usually helps alot.
Apart from that however, this was very touching.

"I love you without *wax*, please take care." was a curious line to finish with. I assume it's a metaphoric?

All in all, I enjoyed the rhythmic verse.

What a beautiful poem... the type of words every girl wants to hear. excellent work