Awwwww thats a really good poem

Wow...such simple words...and yet they really show so much...great job on this...keep it up...i cant say enough about it...it just hits the spot...

It's a sad poem and well written

I agree... even with the simpliest word it had such deep profound meaning. I loved it.

The childlike use of words
and phrases is done so well.
So powerful.
Well done

Such a tough subject to write about...well done. well written very very good. n very sad but good.

Wow this was very touching