Comments : Goodbye, (My sweet demon)

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thoguht this was a great poem
    it flowed well
    and i loved the rhyming

    it never seemed forced

    "Goodbye my sweet demon
    You have followed me all these years
    All the time, In the back of my mind
    You chose to play tag with my fears"

    faovrite part ^^

    and i loved the ending

    nice job

    5/5