Nicely done, just check your spelling before you post and keep up the writing. The loss you feel is felt in your writes. May your heart be filled with peace and joy once again soon.

sadaddy

Wow short but sweet and filled with emotion 4/5 i liked it maybe u can read one of mine.

This is so sweet! i love it soo much XD
4/5 aswell!
but keep writing!
sarah xx

WOW I DONT SEE THE SWEET PART I MEAN U LOST SOMEONE U CARED ABOUT AND NOW YOU CANT STOP THINKIN ABOUT THEM MAYBE THATS WHERE THE SWEET PART COMES IN BUT I LOVE IT ANYWAYS!! KEEP IT UP

Interesting angle, i like your style of writing.
keep posting more poems!

Well done, I like this poem. So simple yet it means so much, when things like this happen. Thanks for writing this one.

- Mouse