Nicely done, all you need to do is correct your spelling. May your heart once again be filled with peace and joy.

sadaddy

I like it..
thats the worst thing to go thru aye...
hope everything works out good for ya
x

Amazing write, sweetie.

Aww, your poems dont suck!
I really really like this one :]

With the correct spellingg this would be a reallly good poem.

Great poem 10/10

hope you check out my poems

keep up the good work :P

This is very good. I love the emotion! Try to check out some of my work!

I think that whoever you are talking to in this poem is going to send you a certain message from above saying that they understand and can't wait to see you yet again.

I like it so much passion..

The last line hit me like ice! 5/5, You deserve it.

Awe its sad, and very touching... now well never know why they did it..... nicely ritten and good flow... *tear*

Very good... I do hope that you find the peace to understand some all the questions raised in the poem. I love it, well done!

This poem is so true.
when someone you love dies, its just horrid