Excellent description and skill throughtout this whole poem, sadness entwined to such a great degree.

5/5 david

A drop of blood from lips pale white
with calm descending into fright
a nightmare now is a dream
but a secret, sealed, forever clean

^^That was one of my favorite stanza's. I like how you wrote the first line and continued on. Your flow was good and emotions were strung into all the right places : ]

Oh my you're going on my fave list, you are so talented m'dear. 5/5 YET AGAIN! :)

Wow very beautiful poem...another great one..5/5

~michelle~

Wow, so emotional and atmosphere is great. It is really deep and you expressed how you feel and still created vivid imagery. I enjoy reading it, it deserves 5/5