WOW WOW!!!!!!!
It is like wow....
Its really good.....
Keep up tha good work ok
~*kalene*~

Good Poem full of passion and love ,,,enjoyable read...keep up he good work 5/5 vote and comment on my latest "my doubts" "gifts of sorrow" "arabian sands" thank you

You have a knack for poetry my friend.
But my advice is focus on pictures not abstractions
Gives the reader more a view what you are writing about.
Good job.

This is a very beautiful poem. I could actually imagine how the rhythm of it would be. You have a very talented way of writing. I am looking foward to reading more of your work.

I'm sorry! I ment to say that these are very beautiful lyrics. lol

Wow your an awesome writer lol i love it