Comments : Sadness

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    You swallow me.
    Hold me in your gaping arms,

    Your dark embrace,
    cold and comforting.

    these were my favorite lines

    YOu did an awesome job

    5/5 for it

    Do read my poems

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Its very much interesting.... 5/5

    Nazeer