Comments : Blissful Beach; Summer Time

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Hearing the laughter of the families
    As they forget to argue and fight
    All content with each other
    Singly soaking in the delight

    Wow beautiful lines. I can totally create a picture in my mind. Very connotative poem with great flow and lexical power. Tc

    With love
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Another great poem....and i love summer! lol so that made me like this poem even more...good job!

    ~michelle~