Truly heart wrenching and really wearing your heart on your sleave with this piece. I feel that you really let go with this one and opened up.
So tender and loving, much more to my palate.
Effortless flow that we have come to expect from you now. I would, however, have liked to see more imagery or metaphors in this piece. I think you could really bring this to life!
Overall very nice work. Very unlike your other pieces.
I hope that soon, my wish will come true
And I'll be where I belong, with you.
Very touching ending lines! I hope your wish comes true too hun.
You have penned a beautiful heart touching piece here. Your heart has whispered ink upon your page and created a poem flowing with sincere thoughts and love.
The title fits so perfectly and the content heart touching.