Very Beautiful.

That was a very beautiful poem, so tender and heartfelt, and wonderfully written, great job,,,your friend Tracy d 5/5

I love this poem...check mine

Truly heart wrenching and really wearing your heart on your sleave with this piece. I feel that you really let go with this one and opened up.

So tender and loving, much more to my palate.
Effortless flow that we have come to expect from you now. I would, however, have liked to see more imagery or metaphors in this piece. I think you could really bring this to life!

Overall very nice work. Very unlike your other pieces.

~Pete.

Sweet and loving

Absoutely beautiful
loved every word
keep it up!

I really enjoyed reading this poem and i know this wont be the last time reading it

Romantic and a longing desire reflected in this poem, very sweet, well done

I hope that soon, my wish will come true
And I'll be where I belong, with you.
^^^
Very touching ending lines! I hope your wish comes true too hun.
You have penned a beautiful heart touching piece here. Your heart has whispered ink upon your page and created a poem flowing with sincere thoughts and love.

The title fits so perfectly and the content heart touching.
Beautifully penned
Luanne

Really love this piece, the flow is great and i like the rhymes too.. Really nice work

I can almost feel the depth of your love in this poem. To be loved in such a way a bloke would be the luckiest of us all.

I loved the flow and the emotion of this piece, 5/5. Em x