Comments : My Hearts Desire

  • 13 years ago

    by Fran

    Very Beautiful.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    That was a very beautiful poem, so tender and heartfelt, and wonderfully written, great job,,,your friend Tracy d 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Nula

    I love this poem...check mine

  • 12 years ago

    by Pete

    Truly heart wrenching and really wearing your heart on your sleave with this piece. I feel that you really let go with this one and opened up.

    So tender and loving, much more to my palate.
    Effortless flow that we have come to expect from you now. I would, however, have liked to see more imagery or metaphors in this piece. I think you could really bring this to life!

    Overall very nice work. Very unlike your other pieces.


  • 12 years ago

    by Corinne

    Sweet and loving

  • 12 years ago

    by Lisa

    Absoutely beautiful
    loved every word
    keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by robs

    I really enjoyed reading this poem and i know this wont be the last time reading it

  • 12 years ago

    by Lucy Vandenberg

    Romantic and a longing desire reflected in this poem, very sweet, well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    I hope that soon, my wish will come true
    And I'll be where I belong, with you.
    Very touching ending lines! I hope your wish comes true too hun.
    You have penned a beautiful heart touching piece here. Your heart has whispered ink upon your page and created a poem flowing with sincere thoughts and love.

    The title fits so perfectly and the content heart touching.
    Beautifully penned

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrew

    Really love this piece, the flow is great and i like the rhymes too.. Really nice work

  • 12 years ago

    by Tony

    I can almost feel the depth of your love in this poem. To be loved in such a way a bloke would be the luckiest of us all.

  • 10 years ago

    by Em

    I loved the flow and the emotion of this piece, 5/5. Em x