Wow really powerful and sad poem...it left me in aw...its amazing...

ashleigh

I love this poem. its strong. keep it up

ayshley

I like this poem,it's amazing.I like the most the last part...it's very deep.Congratulations and keep on the good work cause you're a great poet.Best regards,Mihaela XxXx 5/5

Love the poem... wow, is it getting that bad over there? i know what it's like to have your parents go through a divorce.... and wait, were u drunk when u left that comment? lol, i was in s carolina visiting my dad

Wow, that was a very strong poem with strong emotion. Very well done, it gets my vote, for sure. :( it's sad, though.

The best part of this was the way you captured the innocense of this child in the last line of each stanza and continued to return your readers to that.

This is a great poem good job thx for the comment

keenan

Very amazing brianna I loved it
and I loved the last lines in the first two stanzas
very original and great work