Comments : R.A.P.E

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    Very very powerful!
    This must have took a lot to write.
    I think the free verse and the structure you've used fit perfectly with what your saying.
    Well done m'dear
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (In response to your comment on 'Sapphire Display', i classed 'strong' as two syllables due to the way it is said to imply on how strong the waves are so it would read 'Ster-rong', lol. But thank you =)