No winds blowing through trees.
Darkness surrounds an empty life.
Icy chills slowly turn body cold,
blankness consumes me in eternal sleep.

Cindy dear, yet another beautiful poem, very inspirations write you portrait here, sending great message to the reader, i hope i could write like this, i don't know whether i can..:) thanks for sharing.... hugs...Bert.

This was cute :). I loved the fact that the first Etheree infused exceeding sorrowfulness with me, whereas the latter brought into play such effervescent and promising future. 'twas such a heartwarming write! :D All the best and take care. Love, Debbie

Great poem.
Beautiful piece of writing.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

You left out line 7 in the first part of the double etheree, it goes from line 6 to line 8, but other than that its a great poem cindy, love the imagery, i give it a 5/5!!!

Another beautiful and stunning piece, it goes well with your new display picture. great piece cindy xox sam

Nice Cindy.... great form and content....I love the whole life cycle theme....death and rebirth....excellent....5/5 Debbie

Wow, that is so so meaningful and brilliant.A very powerful and impressive write cindy, i really love it.

Take care
chavii.

A beautiful depiction of life.You are so talented.TAKE CARE.