That peom is seriously amazing!!!!!!! Really it is. Um, you should keep writting for sure.

OMGosh!!!!!! A wonderfull poem, I love it and you kept my attention the whole while! It is a beautiful story and I just wish I could give you more than a 5! So, just know, as I give you a five that if I have ever read a poem "worthy" of an Exellent, it IS this one. This has feeling, rhythm, sadness, life, and just everything I have thought about. You have a way with words and you truly are a blessed poet. Keep writing your wonderful words!