OOo you were right i didnt even notice that..all fixed though

i really like this poem though the words are really powerful and for some reason these lines i could connect to most ((and really loved)):

Depression, this fake me, fenced in by these won'ts.
They come and they laugh, we joke and I smile.

anyway i guess you must be new here but i hope you write some more soon you have great talent.

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Beautiful expression of feelings and thoughts ~Behroze~