Great poem girl.. i like it!! haha.. i wrote some new ones too tehe

Aww.... that really reminds meh of meh...>.< love sucks sumtimes....-.- but great poem, i can relate to it... 5/5 i understand it...o.o

~*~Skye~*~

I agree that love sucks...this poem reminds me of what i was going through at one point...thats when i wrote the poem broken...you write well for a 13 year old =))

O_o
I have def. went through this before.
If you ever need to talk, I'm here. :P

A very emotional piece. The flow was flawless && overall, it was wonderful. Keep up the great work. 5.5

- Stephyy <3

--- Oh no... I don't mind. Please. :P---- Lol.

It was a great poem. Me and many ppl i know can relate. Great flow of words. Keep it up ur good. 5/5 from me.

I loved your poem 5/5...keep up the good work=)......*Melody*

A deliciously colorful write, nature in all its beauty, well done..
5/5

- NZ