Comments : Abandoned in Chains

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Another beautiful poem, Crow! I really enjoy your work, and this.. Oh my gosh, it was just amazing and I can't describe how much I loved it and how much I really enjoyed reading it. In some ways I can connect to this.. It's right, sometimes you do need to hear refusing words. Way to go, Crow! I really hope to read another excellent poem from you soon!! Take care love! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Loveless Nights~

  • 16 years ago

    by Steve Powers

    VEry nice poem. Emptiness is well illustrated. should be "accept" instead of except tho. Check my poems out would love your feedback!
    CHeers