Comments : Optimistic depression pt 1

  • 16 years ago

    by Ciao Bella

    Very unique and interesting poem :) good job

    ashleigh

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Wow! Unique and well organized! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    Very very imaginative concept. this is what poetry tries to draw from within...different aspects and views. definately first rate.

  • 16 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    So this is the poem u started during school! lol, i love it so far... like you said i would, and i can't wait to read the rest
    tim

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I loved it it's so cool
    I've always wanted to write a poem like this
    wonderful job

  • 16 years ago

    by amanda

    This is such a creative poem 5/5