Awsome!!

Si, this is a nice poem and it flows well. There is a minute mistake, thats u have to use too, not to in the heading as well as the last line. Other than its great. Keep writing

I thought this one had a bit of a rocky start but it was great otherwise. i really love the ending sentence, probably because its so true and im sure many people would agree with you on that one. Beautiful poem though i vote 5/5 ^_^

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That is soooooo true FOREVER ENDS TOO SOON!!