This is a great poem. I love the way you balenced the rhyming and the repitition. A perfect love poem deserving a...*drumroll* 5

Great poem and beautiful love:)..keep it up:)5/5
*Melody*

Hi dear,

your poems are flourishing, each and every expression there could be a precious cherish awaits from the professional authors... well done and keep up your work.. 100 marks and you deserve for this poem..

Nazeer