I loved how you compaired new life to fresh death in the fourth stanza. This poem was flawless. perfect 5/5 babe! ^_^

Another excellent poem..i really like the rhyming in this one..i added this to my favorites..great job!5/5

~michelle~

Wow. i loved it, it was beautifully written, i thought it was amazing. the words you use creates such a strong picture in my mind. great work 5/5

First stanza is very powerful! Third stanza is beautifully written. Rhyming is great and very original. Last stanza is incredibly good. Topic is excellent, message too. 5/5

Superbly Penned.
A very interesting thought provoker. It really captures your attention.
I Love the comparison's, and you flow was good.

5/5