Comments : The Thank You Note

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This is a beautiful poem, the message in the end is intensly sad, but it is the way things go sometimes. But..it's better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all, don't you agree?

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    I agree with broker, the message is sad but it really is good. great write. - SS

  • 12 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    ....very real......but I have to (rhetorically, of course) ask.....and you're a 'fool' because ......................??????

  • 12 years ago

    by Lucy Vandenberg

    I particularily like the first 2 verses, so very descriptive, excellent imagery capturing your feelings.

  • 9 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Your lines are so enchanting!!! Im just quite sad it did not end the way I want it to be. lol... but this is such a beautiful piece!!! God bless you!!!