This is a beautiful poem, the message in the end is intensly sad, but it is the way things go sometimes. But..it's better to have loved and lost then to have never loved at all, don't you agree?

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid

I agree with broker, the message is sad but it really is good. great write. - SS

....very real......but I have to (rhetorically, of course) ask.....and you're a 'fool' because ......................??????

I particularily like the first 2 verses, so very descriptive, excellent imagery capturing your feelings.

Your lines are so enchanting!!! Im just quite sad it did not end the way I want it to be. lol... but this is such a beautiful piece!!! God bless you!!!