This was beautiful.
Your flow was almost perfect and the way your portray your emotion was amazing!
I can relate very well. Almost so much that it scares me.
Great job!
5/5
((Amber))

Oh my god!!fantastic.brilliant flow.i read it out loud twice and it sounds fantastic.i love the imagery in your poems and the use of words.keep it up your poems just get better and better and are so breathtakingly beautiful 5/5