Comments : Water on a Motorway

  • 16 years ago

    by HopefulxRomantic

    This poem has been swimming around in my head ever since I actually observed what I'm describing. I've been meaning to write it for a while, but it hasn't changed much from it's original conception.

    Again, this is about the seeing of beauty where others only see regularity and "correct" function, which is the bane of true poetry.

    Feedback's always a pleasure!
    HxR

  • 16 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    This is perfect! Wow it is so deep and meaninful yet simple. Dont get me wrong, It's written beautifully!