This was an excellent piece of writing. Could ya comment some of mine plz.. Anyways you are very talented in poetry... continue to write more..

I really appreciate your work. The rhetorical questions in this piece engaged me to read it. Keep writing and you will improve in an instance :)

5/5 keep it moving

Loveeee this poem.
We havent talked in awhile?
I`m adding this to my favourites?

--Trinity