Comments : She Never Lets It Go To Her Heart

  • 16 years ago

    by gorgeous girl

    This so... amazing.... wait this beyond amzing.. this is very well written.. I loved every bit of it.. great job..

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jeannie....your words always reach deep into my heart.....how many people are there that live behind false smiles...laughing to hide the tears. Excellent write.

    Into her eyes look for the truth
    see deep inside no sign of sparks
    For though a laugh or smile will come
    it never reaches to her heart.

    Every word of this piece touched me. Great job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    OH MY GOODNESS! I want to cry just reading this. It was so easy to put myself in her place and just FEEL the poem. It was beautiful! One of your best!
    Charisma*