Well this is my comment but dont take it to harshly...I didnt really like it it did flow, hardly ryhmed. Also most too short to get a point across. But you did put emotion into it. i would give it a 3/5.

Oh my gosh .. this poem does not deserve to be downvoted...grr that makes me mad!

you did a wonderful job with this... it was full of sadness and emotion...you wrote it beautifully...

and in my opinion this does not deserve a 3.. it deserves a 5..

nice work.5/5