Comments : Reality for me

  • 16 years ago

    by King of Pain

    Your poem tells me of your inner battle. You are very talented and your gift is an asset to this whole planet. Never forget how valuable you are to all of us.

  • 16 years ago

    by Andrew Morton

    "cuts on me describe no pain or misery
    only stupid mistakes that describe me and what i went through these days "

    i love those lines..it takes something negative and gives it a positive message, how its not a representation but more of a reminder..excellent work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Very nice and collabarated i would say something but i would not want you to take it personal but if you were to legnthen your poem and paint a picture with it it would be soo much better 4/5 but it is still a very good poem

  • 16 years ago

    by natyy

    I really like the poems uve written about this situations..good job.like it.