I can read spanish but i dont understand much of it still from what i do understand i agree with you that its a wonderful poem ^_^

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Should I comment in Spanish like Bryan? hehe I dont know, Ill just do it in English.
I thought this poem was so...sexy like you said. I love it! The english version felt so different, but both felt sad. The spanish version added something more to it and it still flowed so well. I would imagine that it would be really hard to make it work in both languages...maybe not. But you did great! Keep it up!

~Mo~