Really interesting poem :) i really like it...

ashleigh

Very interesting concept for the poem here, i liked it

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Awwe this is such an awesome poem, it's so creative, it made me laugh!! great just keenan!!!!! 5/5;)

This was quite innovative, Keenan. It's quite bitter and sweet as well. Poignantly appealing, I dare say. =]

Nice work.

Best wishes,
Marian

Hey, Very interesting thought what about the dinosaurs though?? Do you have one for them too?? That would pretty much complete your series on this.. I like it it's really cool and actually makes you think. ttyl

Beck