Comments : If You Could...

  • 16 years ago

    by S R P

    This was simply beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Chrissie

    This has got to be one of my favourites!! I really enjoyed this. Very beautiful indeed. Flow was fantastic. Awesome work. Keep it up. Xx Chrissie

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    "I'm drowning in rain, but still have a thirst"

    Lovely imagery. Could feel the pain and heartache of your words. I take it the 'rain' is teardrops and the 'thirst' is unrequited love. If I'm wrong, don't tell me, as I love the way it reads with my interpretation. An absolutely wonderful write even with the depth of pain in which it was penned.

    Always,
    Jeannie