Ummmm im in love with thisss haha
i can feel alot of rythem in it.....do you rap? ne ways really nice job:)

Well done, fabulous. great work, great emotions, great peice of work, and how you put the rythem into it, and eerything counts. espcially who the girl you love is. honest poems touch my heart. again well dont 5/5

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WOW! I love this poem its really gentle and sweet. I loved the last stanza. keep up the good work. I'd love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them. thanks
Rachel