Comments : Look Into My Eyes

  • 16 years ago

    by Emma

    Ummmm im in love with thisss haha
    i can feel alot of rythem in it.....do you rap? ne ways really nice job:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Well done, fabulous. great work, great emotions, great peice of work, and how you put the rythem into it, and eerything counts. espcially who the girl you love is. honest poems touch my heart. again well dont 5/5

    C#@++Y

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel

    WOW! I love this poem its really gentle and sweet. I loved the last stanza. keep up the good work. I'd love it if you'd check out my poems and comment/rate them. thanks
    Rachel