Wow amazing poem i really like this one you are obviously a very talented writer

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Excellent dear I couldn't find any flaws in this piece, its just awesome and I really love the usage of the word sow in this piece. I just remembered one line I wrote “sow your happiness, share your sorrows”. Thanks for sharing. tc

This is an amazing poem!
I love your choice of vocabulary.
It's a bit lenghtly but doesn't lose it's meaning at all.
Great job!