Kristie,
There was a truly powerful phrase within this poem that immediately made me want to continuously read this poem. The stanza was this one:

Life is like a big maze
You might take the wrong route
Maybe the right route
Remember never give Up

The part about the maze showed so much truth and emotion.
The flow was a little off, but that's OK ^_^
You're a great poet, keep it up!
5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori
<The Dreamer>

Aww thanks did you read my other ones?