Comments : Smack.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good poem xx

  • This is going to my favotite poems list greatly written i CAN RELATE TPO Ii you write great poems hun. :-} The word SMACK in the middle of this great poem add great effect to the poem. keep up & have a nice day btw. thanks for the comment I appreciate it very muck keep up the great work :-}