I personally think this is a good poem! lol!,
if you want to use this posem for anything my full name is Mia Churms
ty! x

Mia,
This is indeed a very good poem ^_^. The flow and rhyming was there, and you described your topic so well. I laughed when you included the part about "meals on wheels".
I wouldn't change anything, so keep it up, and 5/5

With all due respect,
Hatori
<The Dreamer>