Comments : Everything i am

  • 16 years ago

    by Yuna

    Wow! Sorry for the late comment!

    I was just watching the movie "Van Helsing" and when I read this poem, it instantly reminded me of it. I could see the scene along with every small piece of hair and movement of the werewolf. It was so descriptive!! I like how you put the poem in the view of the wolf. It added lots of character and mood. The sounds were so lifelike, and the ending was something very new.

    I wonder how you got the inspiration for this wonderful piece of writing. It seems almost like a real fairytale. Overall, this poem was awsome!!! Keep up the great work!!!