Comments : Silent Melody

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    It's a pretty poem, though I thought the flow was off in some spots, which made it kinda hard to follow at times...But it had some pretty wording to it, like your second stanza!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by oldthings

    I really like this one. I'm in a very lovey mood this last little while and this poem really makes me smile. I also really like the feeling it talks about, its fantastic when you find someone like that who you can understand and know what their feeling without even having to talk to them, and just being around them can make you feel on top of the world. Fantastic contribution to love poems on this site. great job. =)

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "A quiet song
    Dances in the air
    From your heart to mine
    This only we share"

    I think it's safe to say this is going on my favourites and it's definitely one of my faves by you.
    Love in all it's glory. Something so simple yet with so much hidden depths
    5/5
    *gem*