Comments : Back Again

  • 16 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    WOW! Now this is great! Sad and depressing, but oh so true for too many people. I love the repetitive stanza. It was perfect. and this stanza

    He haunts me when we're together
    And stalks me when we're apart
    With him my body's not whole
    But without him I have a broken heart

    was awesome!
    Charisma*

  • 16 years ago

    by JiKaRiN

    Wow!!! I can relate to it! For that, here's a 5/5! I liked it a lot!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This poem is very dark and touching. You wrote it excellently, expressing emotions with great honesty.
    The fourth stanza is my favorite.
    5/5 from me