Well you have no comments on this, and I felt sad for you, so I thought I'd read, and then write.. and am I glad I did!!?? I have no idea why you have no comments on this, as it's beautiful!! I would have preferred to see a comma after 'I';
Let I, and you too, ...
otherwise it is grammatically incorrect, however, your use of language fits the period style of your write. Very Very well done indeed. xx