Comments : Heartbreaker From Hell

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    //* Aww that's kind of sad. I hope you aren't like that lol.

    Neverless I liked this poem. I think it's the first I've ever read where the girl is the heartbreaker 'cause most of the time the boys are. The rhyming was great too and the flow was flawless,,*

    Great Job && Keep it up. Take care!

  • 16 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    P.S. I gave you 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by just me

    I love this, it's sad but it's beautiful.....and yes girls break hearts too.......it's a new perspective. I like how u gave some insight into how she's more than she seems ..... like mayb she hurts others because she herself was hurt.
    people are always more than they seem....u just have to look a lil closer sometimes...break thru the exterior to see the person who's inside...