Comments : Everything is Bright

  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    It's very cute, I like the sweet love imagery and also the added humor of your teeth chattering. I really like it!

    Keep it up,
    xxx
    Lizzy

  • Another very nice poem, I really like this one, I like how you use the protection from cold, definately my favourite part in this poem.

    Very nicely written with a nice flow to it and your feelings and emotions portrayed nicely thorughout.

    5/5 once more, well done :)