This was a perfectly written great poem that was a joy to read, you are a talented writer, keep up the great job, a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it

It was beautiful, i dont know what to say, i mean, WOW. i loved it. the way you write with such emotion, you can tell that your writing comes straight from the heart. 5/5

And the peace that you watched from afar,
as it dipped and spilled into each sunset,
is at the breach of your burdened fingertips.
Grasp it, and clutch it close to your heart.
Not because you ought to, but because you can!

my fave lines ^^

I'm speechless. The choice of words and the descriptions made the meaning of the poem come alive. This is the type of poem I like. The second and the fourth stanza are my favorite.

Wow, I like this piece from the beginning to the end. Every stanza is excellently written, and the whole poem is very deep and meaningful. I like the choice of words in it. The fourth stanza is my favorite.
5/5 from me