I don't like this poem very much. I don't like the topic and it is too simple. I can't see atmosphere of this piece, but I really liked imagery. 4/5

This poem is simple like the Lemon Soap one. Hehe.. silly Elaine =) I can't believe you're the one waking up your mom with the cooking and sounds of pots and pans moving. It should be the other way around.. hehe, anyways, it was another good Senryu poem though!

5/5 ~Loveless Nights~ aka ~Kayla~