I loved your poem.I could imagine it all happening in my head.Imagine all his tricks and stupid little games.this is a great poem.

Wow is all i can say that poem is amazing i can not beleave i could picture it in my head. I loved every word of it and felt the emation. it has such strong feelings of betral i have felt that b4 it is enough to mak eu cry. good job on this on e

Luv brittany

Such a sad poem keeki, top work as always, but so sad. Well you know you can talk to me anytime hun, and you know where to find me.

<3 Matt xxx

Thats horrible Im so sorry if that happened to you... Its a good poem though... Just letting you know im here if u ever want to talk sweetie ok? xx

This is truly an amazing and
heartfelt poem.
I'm really sorry that you've had such a hard time
but you need to know
that you will grow stronger.
I'm sure that your poem is going to help
a lot of other innocent girls
who have suffered the same pain as
you to cope with what has happened to them.
Your use of words was stunning as you created amazing images
of what happened.
Well if you ever wanna chat then PM me anytime.
Great job hun!!

Wow, I mean, Wow! excellent poem. I had a freind who did that to this girl who was 13, he was 19. He always said that he was a romeo and she was the juliet. For in the story, the age is the same. He boke her of everything. Me and him quit our friendship. I had to purge my life. for if you hang out with people like that, you may end up like that. Like a perfectly healthy apple in a basket of rotton apples. that apple will be rotton soon.
this is a 5/5 poem.
PoetryKnight
aka
Aaron

This poem is beautifuL and very well written, I'm really sorry that you've had such a hard time but i went through the same thing and I know how you feel. Just Like you told me, if I ever need to talk you're here, Likewise hunny.
With Love, Annie

Omg I'm actually crying. I can imagine this really happening... ugh. I'm so sorry it happened to you though. Such a sad poem but wonderful. 5/5. I love it, in a dark sort of macabre way.

~KM~